支招小做文(171) I 静态表格 四个国家牛奶产量窜改
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分享雅思检验小做文真题范文。Guatemala：牛奶产量初终最低（第一年只要211,静态家牛000 liters→随后到2010年上涨了2倍多）
【Body 2】
We can also find thatthe annual milk production in Australiaranked the second placeduring the given period. Its figureclimbed significantlyfrom 6,426,000 liters in the initial year to itspeakat 10,847,000 liters in 2000,followed by a marginal fall to9,023,000 liters in 2010.Likewise, the amount of milk produced in Tanzaniawitnessed a remarkable increasefrom 515,000 liters in the original year to 725,000 liters in 2010,after which there emerged a slight decline to626,000 liters by the end of the period.
[2024/ 1/ 6] The表格 table below shows the annual milk production in four countries in 1990, 2000, and 2010.
【主体段分段】：
格式1：依照 国家 分段【本篇文章回支此种分段格式】
- Body 1：Netherlands（初终最下） + Guatemala（初终最低）
- Body 2：Australia + Tanzania（那两个国家的牛奶产量 趋势相似）
格式2：依照时分分段
【开尾段】
The table compares the annual production of milk in Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania and Guatemala in 1990, 2000 and 2010.
【概述段】
In general, the quantity of milk produced in all the four countries experienced an upward trend.Also, Netherlandswas the largest producer of milkthroughout the given period.
思路要面：
- 四个国家的牛奶产量团体皆呈上降趋势
- Netherlands牛奶产量初终最下（**发言面提示：糊心化形貌）
【Body 1】
Looking at the information in more detail, we can see thatthe annual production of milk in Netherlandsremained the largestthroughout the period.Itsfiguresaw a modest dropfrom 11,226,000 liters in 1990 to 11,155,000 liters in 2000, before rising remarkably tothe highest point at 11,626,000 liters in the final year.By contrast,Guatemala wasthe smallest producerof milk. Only 211,000 liters of milk was produced in this country,butthis figure more than doubled to 466,000 liters in 2010.
思路要面：
- Netherlands：牛奶产量初终最下（小幅度降降→较着上降）
- 比较而止，究竟了局中教搜检定稿。个国改胜方便是奶产日复一日那一面面小小积极的堆散。每篇范文皆经过专业团队几次校订，量窜
